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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Thursday, 9 November 2017

My Bunny

My Bunny.

My bunny name was was pinky, she she liked to poo a lot and also sleep behind the t.v.

One day my dad made a house outside in the backyard, where my dog Zeus was. It was pinky first time sleeping out side.

The next morning we went out to go feed Zeus and Pinky. Then we saw that the dog had, sat on pinky. He tried to clime into the window. 

We had our aunt come over and sing for pinky and my dad bury her.   

When i found out my leg was broken

When i found out my leg was broken.

When i first broke my leg, was when i was going down a hill with roller skates. My Nan said my leg was a sprained ancle. 

I stayed in bed for that night and the next day too. The next day my dad came and picked me up, so he can take me to Auckland hospitable.

I found out my leg was broken  so i got a purple carts and the next time i got a green one.

My sister

My sister.

My sister is 1 years old, her birthday is on May 24th 2016 and she also has the same birthday as me.

I wake up every morning waiting for her to wake up, so i can make her breakfast and change her to get ready for the day.

Every day after school i play with her for like an hour. After dinner i shower her then i watch moana so she can go to sleep because that is her favorite movie. 

Friday, 25 August 2017

Octopus vs shark.

This is my writing today we watched a video of a dog shark and an octopus. We made a plan and then we  used our plans and writ this story.

Thursday, 24 August 2017

Reflection on cross country.

Reflection on cross country

 (How it was ) Today was the most worst day of my life, I hate running and I hate cross country. 
( Next goal )  I think I can get better at running by trying harder and trying to finish the race. 
( How I feel ) I would like to have more choice about how many laps I have to do.
(My goal this year) Was to finish the race.
(Did i complete my goal)  No i did not I  did one lap and that was it.

Monday, 21 August 2017

My dream.

This is my writing in Tui hub.


My dream.

My dream is to become an artist i had this dream when i was 6 years old, I would like to become an artist when I'm 21 or 30.

I want to become an artist because i have always loved crafting so i would like to make lots of things with different meterlies.

I would like to make things for other people like famous people but they don't have to be famous they can be any one.

Friday, 18 August 2017

Tui hubs writing.

  

This is Tui hubs slide show of writing  in Miss O'Neil's and Garth's writing groups. There is a mix of room 12 and 11 kids in the writing group.

Monday, 14 August 2017

Cross Country Writing.

Cross Country Writing
Cross country is a race to get kids fit and a good time to have fun.  We spend a good amount of time running in school. It’s tiring because you need to run a long way and you also get the stitch which makes you slow down. That’s why you should try to set goals.


You should never cross your arms when you’re running because that makes your energy go straight to the ground. Keep your face calm and make sure your shoulders are relaxed. When you're running up a hill trying to do little steps and when you're running on the flat try not to stomp on the ground because that makes you go slower.

Cross country is coming up so soon at HES. We are going out to run every day and we’re also doing different activities like the beep test and other running related fitness. Some students run at home to improve their running technique.

Thursday, 27 July 2017

My groups adventure story.

This is my groups Adventure story we write about the Lord. We had lots of fun working together.

Thursday, 29 June 2017

Peach grove performance.

Peach grove performance.


My Favorite part was when we all got to see kapa haka perform and the haka.
Why: Because we got to see what other people look like not just us doing kapa haka and i vere liked their songs.


How i seen that i know from last year  Scana, Nevae, Desmond, Rani, Winter,Tabatha and Rachel.

 

Thursday, 15 June 2017

Six sentence story.

This is a six sentence story. I made these with Tia and my self we were coming up with random things. It was so much fun you sold try it one day.

Six sentence story

1.Introduce the main character
Once upon a time there was a dog named Gus.
Once upon a time there was a dog named Zeus.

2. Describe where the character lives
He lived in a small house in the back yard.
He lived in a smallish biggish house.
3.Describe the characters special talent
His special talent was farting and making his family leave the room.
His special talent was eating non edible things.

4.Describe the character’s problem
He chased a cat then the cat jumped a fence and he thought he could jump the fence too, after he did it he hurt his leg and farted really badly.
He had eaten his house.

5. Tell why the character felt this way.
He felt bad because he hurt himself and couldn't go to doggy day care and be with other dogs.
He felt bad because he has no house and now has to live under the tree.

6. Tell how the character solves the problem
He solved this problem by staying in bed and kept resting his leg.
His owners could build him another house or buy him another house.

Wednesday, 14 June 2017

My Pepeha.

Pepeha


Ko Te Aroha taku maunga
Ko Ohinemuri taku awa
Ko Tainui taku waka
Ko Kirikiriroa Rawhiti te Kura
Ko Pippa Wright te rangatira
Ko Ms O’Neil, me Garth raua ko Edie oku kaiako
Ko Tom raua ko Sonny oku koroua
Ko Eve raua Ko TeAmo oku kuia
Ko Jade toku papa
Ko Nunu toku mama
Ko Ananeah toku teina
Ko Maximus raua ko Trey oku teina
Ko Abagail ahau
Tena koutou
Tena koutou
Tena koutou katoa